Selected Work
A closer look at how I work.
These illustrative samples show the form my deliverables and feedback can take. They use demonstration content—not confidential client material—and are labeled accordingly.
Program & Evaluation
From results to a useful decision.
An illustrative dashboard shows how I bring outcome data, context, and a clear next question into the same view.
Program learning snapshot
Interpretation, not decoration: Overall progress is promising, but the aggregate trend may conceal different experiences across participant groups. Disaggregate before deciding what to scale.
What I would deliver
A tailored version might include agreed-upon indicators, clearly labeled limitations, accessible charts, an interpretation of what the pattern does and does not show, and recommendations tied to the decisions in front of your team.
- Demonstrates
- Indicator selection, analysis, data visualization, interpretation, reporting
- Important
- All figures above are illustrative demo data
Editorial
Feedback that explains the problem—and gives the author somewhere to go.
This original sample demonstrates my substantive editing style without reproducing anyone else's work.
Community input was gathered to ensure the program met all participant needs. The survey showed that most people felt supported, proving the model was effective and should be expanded.
Possible revision
Among survey respondents, most described the program as supportive. Because the survey reflects the experiences of respondents—not everyone eligible to participate—these findings suggest where the model may be working and identify questions to examine before expansion.
The revision is not presented as the only “correct” sentence. It demonstrates the direction of the feedback: narrow unsupported claims, clarify what the evidence represents, and preserve space for the author's actual conclusion.
Fiction feedback
A reader memo, not just scattered reactions.
For science fiction, fantasy, and dystopian manuscripts, I track the reading experience across the whole work and then organize the feedback so the author can see both local moments and larger patterns.
- What is working: elements of voice, character, worldbuilding, or tension worth protecting during revision.
- Where momentum changes: scenes where pacing drags, stakes blur, or information arrives too early or too late.
- Questions the manuscript raises: places where the reader needs more context—or where ambiguity is doing productive work.
- Revision priorities: the few changes most likely to improve the manuscript as a whole.
Current experience
Disability Policy Foundry
I provide substantive review of disability-policy writing, including feedback on argument, organization, clarity, framing, and the consequences of language choices.
- My emphasis
- Specific, prioritized, revision-ready comments
- My role
- Strengthen the work without replacing the author's analysis or voice
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